this phase was very hard. At the time of writing this, i haven’t yet finished writing my paper. I keep going back and looking at my sources and cutting them and choosing different sources as the sources I am getting are either not in depth enough with statistics or just don’t fit the different criteria of sources. I want to get an A so i need to make sure I have enough sources and use them efficiently enough to get the 8 pages required to get the A. While this might not be in the final version, I am taking a risk right now by starting the essay off with the counter argument, showing how social media is good, and writing about how it is bad for the remainder of the essay.

I don’t revise my work. I use grammarly after im done writing and whatever it tells me, I fix. I also read my paper aloud and if it doesn’t sound right when I’m saying it, I change it. when I write, I try to make it so the paper can be said during a conversation or speech, because I think the most effective way of writing is the way we speak.